After presenting our brief to our class and teacher, we received some audience feedback, on what they liked, didn't think would work or they needed further explanations. This gives us the opportunity to answer them and rethink some of ideas.
"Love the exploration of mental illness and gender empowerment. Also love to aspect of different lighting! It will be very effective! How will you stray from the glorification of mental illnesses though?"
To avoid making the fact of mental illness seem glorious, we will be showing what can happen for someone who suffers from it, by showing the affect on relationships, and also, the idea of having a hospital scene where the protagonist getting examined continuously will hopefully stray away from the idea of glorification
"In terms of editing, how are you going to represent her change in personality?"
With the help of inspirational videos, we feel editing will reveal her different sides, as it is repeated throughout the video, it will give an idea to the audience that she has changed. With the idea that each layer would be a different personality.
"How are you going to recreate the 'How deep is your love' section?"
Thinking ahead again, we feel it will be mainly done by editing after filming, with layers and changing the colour.
"Are you going to conform to the indie genre?"
We plan on conforming with the indie genre by focusing ur video on a narrative, however, the props, costumes and miss en scene do not necessarily conform, which means we are subverting to the indie genre and conforming with the Pop and Alternative Genre.
"How does your lyrics relate to the narrative idea?"
The lyrical concept for this song is about freeing her animal, and although this can be interpreted differently by everyone, with the violent lyrical content, the meaning we got from this is that, everyone has an animal, and they want it to be freed as it holds them back from what they want. In this case, the idea of the animal is her disorder and it holds her back from having a happy life with her boyfriend. Yet we also felt that we would show how love drives you crazy, as the man stays around and gets pushed around because he loves her, but it drives him crazy.
"Where are you going to film the hospital scenes?"
Being very unlikely that we will get permission to film in a real hospital, we hope to recreate a scene, similar to 'This Is Gospel' by Panic At The Disco, as they simply have a bed and the equipment. Having a bright room, but a black background.
"How will you get the hospital props? the bed?"
The props for this may be difficult to get a hold of, in which case, if we are unable to, we will use the standard equipment, i.e a clipboard, checking the patient etc.
"Are you sure the school hall/house locations will look professional enough for your video?"
After discussing, we feel that the school and house will not work well for the music video, and therefore will not being using it within our video.
"How are you going to make the two extremes link?('American dream' vs 'Mental institute')"
This is something that will need to be planned with details, yet an initial idea is lighting and mise en scene. With the hospital scenes and first half of the video, where she will appear in a mental institute, there will be a very basic and minimalist set, simple clothing and just a black background, compared to the extravagant idea of the american dream.
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Why has the female protagonist got control over her boyfriend?"
As a common stereotype for someone with this disorder is to put themselves first, and thus, ruins relationships, and we want to expand on that as her boyfriend would be with her throughout, but he slowly becomes drained due her dominance, as we want to reveal the way she drains him, starting of with the happy relationship to where she controls him.
"Really like the idea and the inspiration video that you showed. How/where would you get the doctors equipment, e.g. needle, oxygen mask etc."
Stated above in another question, we do not intend to be as graphic as our inspirational video, as we know we will not be able to portray it professionally, which is why we will probably use the minimal props, as the mise en scene should reveal the location well.
"Are you following the narrative video compilation completely?(Really like it!!)"
We plan to try and stay close to the video shown, as we feel it portrays our narrative well, although some elements change.
"How are you going to reveal the protagonists multiple personality disorder? love the video"
Similar to a question above, we plan to use editing to reveal the change in personality, however, we like the idea of not stating the exact reason for her being in the hospital, as we feel that everyone has their own interpretation to why she may be in hospital and acts the way she is, but with the editing similar to "How Deep Is Your Love", will give hints.
"How are you going to approach such a touchy subject and not offend the audience?"
As we research more into this topic, we will find out the stereotypes for this, and try to avoid these as much as possible.
"How do you plan on showing the projections?"
Thinking roughly, we have two ways we will experiment with this before deciding finally, either by layering on photoshop or using a literal projector. But it will need some testing before hand to see what works best.
"Have you done any research into 'Madness' as a taboo controversial subject?"
Not yet, we have not, as we wanted to make sure people understood and liked our initial narrative idea, and now that we know people like it, we will be looking into ways to represent her Multiple Personality Disorder.
"Love all of the ideas for the video! i especially love the idea of the bit of Gigi Hadid"
As people enjoy the idea of using this, we are extremely happy as we feel it will work well in our video.
"We love the projecting images. Not sure about the school location. How would you show she has taken control?"
We plan on showing our female protagonist has control, by our male character mimicking what she does, taken from our inspiration with Taylor Swifts 'Blank Space'. The apple scene, can have a religious meaning behind it, with Eve being able to control Adam, which is what we want to represent. Yet, in our inspiration, the video has jump cuts between the two protagonists, she grips the apple, he grips his head, she bites in the apple, she spits it out. We want to reveal that she has control in a very similar way. And the school location if used, would be simply used for the photography studio as we realised the school and the house would look unprofessional for our video with our narrative idea.